Talk:COMP 3000 Essay 1 2010 Question 9 - Revision history

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2010-10-15T08:48:27Z

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	--[[User:Naseido\|Naseido]] 4:25 EST, 15 October 2010		--[[User:Naseido\|Naseido]] 4:25 EST, 15 October 2010
	Okay. So, as of now everything has been edited for grammar and spelling and format and I think its looking good. Only issue is someone is adding to the WinFS section right now so I can't edit it. My suggestion is to '''scrap that section''' because its not even really related ( ie its not a traditional file system). anyway, if you want to go on with it go ahead but make sure you edit for grammar,spelling.. and also edit the conclusion. Unfortunately, i'm way too tired to stay up and wait till its done to do the editing myself..sorry.		Okay. So, as of now everything has been edited for grammar and spelling and format and I think its looking good. Only issue is someone is adding to the WinFS section right now so I can't edit it. My suggestion is to '''scrap that section''' because its not even really related ( ie its not a traditional file system). anyway, if you want to go on with it go ahead but make sure you edit for grammar,spelling.. and also edit the conclusion. Unfortunately, i'm way too tired to stay up and wait till its done to do the editing myself..sorry.

			--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 08:48, 15 October 2010 (UTC)No worries. That is me. I am just finishing it up. I was thinking of scrapping it but I am going to keep it short.

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2010-10-15T08:29:52Z

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	--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:22, 15 October 2010 (UTC)		--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:22, 15 October 2010 (UTC)
	I wish I could have got this started earlier but 4104 had a crazy assignment that destroyed me since Saturday.		I wish I could have got this started earlier but 4104 had a crazy assignment that destroyed me since Saturday.

			--[[User:Naseido\|Naseido]] 4:25 EST, 15 October 2010
			Okay. So, as of now everything has been edited for grammar and spelling and format and I think its looking good. Only issue is someone is adding to the WinFS section right now so I can't edit it. My suggestion is to '''scrap that section''' because its not even really related ( ie its not a traditional file system). anyway, if you want to go on with it go ahead but make sure you edit for grammar,spelling.. and also edit the conclusion. Unfortunately, i'm way too tired to stay up and wait till its done to do the editing myself..sorry.

	== Essay Format Take 2 ==		== Essay Format Take 2 ==

2010-10-15T08:15:58Z

Who is doing what

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	--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:34, 15 October 2010 (UTC) Personally I am not certain if an example should be in the conclusion.... I like the opening lines though. Kind of disregarding the rest of the essay though I think.		--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:34, 15 October 2010 (UTC) Personally I am not certain if an example should be in the conclusion.... I like the opening lines though. Kind of disregarding the rest of the essay though I think.

			--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 08:15, 15 October 2010 (UTC)
			I think that conclusion is looking more focussed great job.

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2010-10-15T07:52:36Z

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	Lester: Working on section 3 BTRFS and WinFS		Lester: Working on section 3 BTRFS and WinFS

	Tawfic: ~~Looking into the~~ conclusion.		Tawfic: added a conclusion. Not planning to add anything else. It's sleep time !!

	KEY ISSUE: We need a thesis statement. Please suggest ideas.		KEY ISSUE: We need a thesis statement. Please suggest ideas.

2010-10-15T07:34:30Z

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	Repeat for the other two sections current and future with each contrast/compare getting larger since they more comparable and with different conclusions.		Repeat for the other two sections current and future with each contrast/compare getting larger since they more comparable and with different conclusions.

	--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:34, 15 October 2010 (UTC) Personally I am not certain if an example should be in the conclusion.... I like the opening lines though. Kind of disregarding the rest of the essay though I think.		--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:34, 15 October 2010 (UTC) Personally I am not certain if an example should be in the conclusion.... I like the opening lines though. Kind of disregarding the rest of the essay though I think.

2010-10-15T07:34:09Z

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	Repeat for the other two sections current and future with each contrast/compare getting larger since they more comparable and with different conclusions.		Repeat for the other two sections current and future with each contrast/compare getting larger since they more comparable and with different conclusions.
			--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:34, 15 October 2010 (UTC) Personally I am not certain if an example should be in the conclusion.... I like the opening lines though. Kind of disregarding the rest of the essay though I think.

	== Deadline ==		== Deadline ==

2010-10-15T07:22:42Z

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	I am still adding stuff myself. I think Anil will lock the Wiki around 7:00 Am or so. So anytime		I am still adding stuff myself. I think Anil will lock the Wiki around 7:00 Am or so. So anytime
	before that is Ok.		before that is Ok.

			--[[User:Lmundt\|Lmundt]] 07:22, 15 October 2010 (UTC)
			I wish I could have got this started earlier but 4104 had a crazy assignment that destroyed me since Saturday.

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2010-10-15T05:39:34Z

Who is doing what

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	Lester: Working on section 3 BTRFS and WinFS		Lester: Working on section 3 BTRFS and WinFS

			Tawfic: Looking into the conclusion.

	KEY ISSUE: We need a thesis statement. Please suggest ideas.		KEY ISSUE: We need a thesis statement. Please suggest ideas.

2010-10-15T05:17:48Z

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	== Who is doing what ==		== Who is doing what ==
	Suggestion: In order to avoid duplication. Please state what section/item you're currently working on.		Suggestion: In order to avoid duplication. Please state what section/item you're currently working on.

	~~Tawfic : Currently working on Section One ZFS.~~

	Azemanci: Currently working on Section Three Current File Systems.		Azemanci: Currently working on Section Three Current File Systems.

2010-10-15T03:15:17Z

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	Nisrin (naseido): Working on intro, conclusion and editing		Nisrin (naseido): Working on intro, conclusion and editing

			Lester: Working on section 3 BTRFS and WinFS

	KEY ISSUE: We need a thesis statement. Please suggest ideas.		KEY ISSUE: We need a thesis statement. Please suggest ideas.